In the developed world, average Life expectancy is increasing.
What problem will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
There is no denial that people, especially in industrialized nations, expect a longer life span compared to average age the past. However, this circumstance has drawn a mounting concern in the society. It is sensible that this is an overriding factor of major problems impinging on community. Tackling such problem will not be straight-forward, but there are measures that can be taken, which I will show in this essay.
On the one hand, the predominant obstacles which aging population results in are twofold. One of the most primary problems is that this situation brings about the financial burden on government. It is no wonder that elderly people at retirement age require a substantial amount of money from nation’s budget to live on. For instance, the epic proportion of elderly along with a small number of young adults will lead to the reduce in tax income. In the sense that tax which should be used to be allocated in other categories, has to be paid for pension. In addition, another trouble arising from increasing life expectancy is the lack of workforce in order to give rise to burgeoning economy. Needless to say, the elderly by no means as effective as young teenagers in terms of physical strength or mental agility, which may results in inproduction and postponed tasks.
Apart from the obstacles above, there are numerous potential ways to address or at least mitigate its effect. The burden of responsibility lies in the hand of government is that they can lengthen the work age from 60 to 65 or above because many elderly still have enough health and ambition to continue their work despite old age. Moreover, government should encourage people give birth to children by supporting finance payment to who do not have ability to bring up children. For examples, many nations such as Australia have already provided an astronomous fee including accommodation, education or health insurance to a child who was born in an indigent family. What is more, government should welcome the immigration so as to guarantee a sufficient employee, replace for people at the retire age. Last but not least, one feasible approach is that authority can allocate enough money in health service to meet the demands of increasing life expectancy.
In conclusion, so as to contend with those dire consequences, government and indivdual are both responsible to take a step and minimize the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, apart from, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05527638191 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91655624769 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8162319226 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.777777778 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197390605724 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567284605363 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568799853437 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113507033261 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970730644818 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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