when there is a new technological device is available, some people will buy it immediately, while others would wait until many others have adopted it. Which view do you agree more?
many people buy new devices as soon as it is out in the market. others,like me, believe that it is not the wise thing to do.
There is a saying in my country, that says: do not make the same mistakes others did. Companies who offer products, such as computers, tablets and phones, always almost market their goods with a positive light. that is why it is difficult for us, the consumers, to decide whether we should buy it or not. Nowdays, for every new phone or computer there is many objective reviews on the internet, which are not influnced by the brand's desireto sell. that why Iwould wait for other people to use and comment before I acquire a new device. For instance, last year I wanted to buy a new laptop although I had one that worked perfectly. The new one was just promising and look really amazing, it had a lot of gadgets and new and uniqe tools, but fortunatly, after thinking again about it, I decided against pursuing a new computer. Two months later I came across a negative review on the same modal, and that made me realise I was smart not buying this computer immidiatly.
Moreover, buying the latest device could be realy expensive. pusrsuing months after its realse to the market could save people a lot of money. Take, for example, Samsung's Galaxy 8 Note. When the new phone first brought to the market it cost almost 1000 euro. although I was tempted to endow myself this magnifecent phone right away, I tought better of it, and waited 5 months before I bought it and I paid less than 450 euros: I saved more then 50 percent.
In conclusion, while new devices and gadgets facintes me, I decide everytime not to be hasty but to be wise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49671052632 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37132269258 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5400101033 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4375 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222542294396 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697834109904 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530578004412 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132451889903 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038228109841 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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