Every year several languages die out. Some people say it is not important because if we speak fewer languges life would be easier. Do you agree or disagree?
it is argued that a number of languages are coming to end with the passage of time. While some people say that life would be easier with fewer languages, I agree with those who have the opinion that it is necessary to have many languages. This is because cultures may die out and having more languages provide more opportunities to learners.
it is a fact of life that a language represents the culture of people. if people stop using their mother tongue, it will mean that their traditions and cultures are at the risk of dying out. languages are part and parcel of history, and their extinction would mean end of history. For instance, in the past people used to speak many languages, but now we rarely know about the culture of people who used to speak those languges.
More languages being spoken in the world offer more choices to people who have love to learn a lanuguage. if we had only a few lanuages spoken by people, language learners would not have more options to choose from. For example, after learning French language I felt motivated to learn eight more languages as I had the option to choose from many languages.
In conclusion, I completely disagee that having fewer languages would not affect the quality of life, because it can wipe out many cultures and people would not have a variety of options to learn languages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73839662447 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44327480397 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510548523207 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1541350601 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.090909091 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268490056593 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105797263252 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546298657262 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175132750583 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511179494466 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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