write a letter yo your manager about a new colleaguewho makes things difficult at work for all of your team.
Describe why he makes it difficult.
Describe your feeling regarding the situation.
What do you want your manager to do about it?
Dear Mr. Levi
As you know, recently, move into our department a new colleague, and I want to complain about him. You put him as supervisor on me and my team, I think this decision is mistake and i would like it change immediately.
I think this position of supervisor defiantly unneccessary cause ,my team and I are very professions and can work good without this colleague.
The main problem with him that he can not understand deeply the needs of our work and the complexity of our jobs at the department. He is not profession at computer science and it can take time till he learn al the materials, In a meanwhile he behave very aggressive for the member's team cause he feel does not enough good.
I have asked from him several times to get him stop, I am also explain him the situation that he need to let us do our tasks as we know during long time. He realized the situation and even apologized and promised being less pushy, but it is repeat again almost every day.
I want to suggest moving him to different position in our company, it will decrease the stress between the member's team and increase the efficiency of the work.
Thank you for your corporation in this matter.
Your sincerely
Sharon
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...m, I think this decision is mistake and i would like it change immediately. I th...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changes'?
Suggestion: changes
...decision is mistake and i would like it change immediately. I think this position of ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... supervisor defiantly unneccessary cause ,my team and I are very professions and c...
^^
Line 6, column 203, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...er science and it can take time till he learn al the materials, In a meanwhile he beh...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 245, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'behaves'.
Suggestion: behaves
...arn al the materials, In a meanwhile he behave very aggressive for the members team ca...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 298, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...ggressive for the members team cause he feel does not enough good. I have asked fro...
^^^^
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'explained'.
Suggestion: explained
...everal times to get him stop, I am also explain him the situation that he need to let u...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alized the situation and even apologized and promised being less pushy, but it is...
^^
Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...nd promised being less pushy, but it is repeat again almost every day. I want to suggest ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ration in this matter. Your sincerely Sharon
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58181818182 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5748304927 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622727272727 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2248898392 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167408313249 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772188213851 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572296750579 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826199870382 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517462117872 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.