write a letter yo your manager about a new colleaguewho makes things difficult at work for all of your team.
Describe why he makes it difficult.
Describe your feeling regarding the situation.
What do you want your manager to do about it?
Dear mr. Johnson,
I am writing this letter with regard to mr. tuan who is a new member of my team in the back-end software developing department.
mr. tuan was assigned to work in my team last month. since the day he started, the team and I have been encountering countless mistakes in his coding. According to our rules, everyone has to do their programming and recheck before submitting to me. this person, however, has never checked his work no matter how hard I tried to remind him.
Due to this person, I am facing big problems to deliver final products on time and I have received some negative feedback from our valued customers. this makes me feel very frustrated as a leader who takes responsibility for delivery before deadlines. Moreover, I cannot stand this person because he seems not to listen to anything from me since I am his superior.
Therefore, I would like to suggest that you should have a private conversation with mr. tuan about this situation and persuade him to cooperate. If possible, please give this person some training or transfer him to another department.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Mr
...-end software developing department. mr. tuan was assigned to work in my team l...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...assigned to work in my team last month. since the day he started, the team and I have...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ive feedback from our valued customers. this makes me feel very frustrated as a lead...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, as to, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90452261307 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72702784949 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668341708543 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4979811633 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7142857143 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12038194957 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430955302515 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436012075375 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529479466105 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020930191882 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.