Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays people are using different types of medicine like alternative, traditional and conventional. Among those categories, the use of alternative medicine become a trend. So some best forms of this method are ineffective and at worst they might be dangerous. As such there are both merits and demerits of this trend, my opinion is this statement is warranted and there is a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most prominent one that, as it is claimed when a cancer patient treat with alternative methods rather than using modern methods, the cancer will not cure but will lead to complex situation of the patient's life.
Moreover if these medical treatment applied for spreding disease such as cholara, fever or chicken-pox, factual evidence of enhancement of spreading and effeting for others could be witnessed with the guarantee of this trend. Another example is if this method applied for a surgery definetly invitably causing for paradoxical effect in the patient life. other methods of medicine should use to cure those kind of sickness.
Furthermore, as speaking for the contradictory view point, most of us have sense that treatment of Ayurvedic medicine is the viable and long lasting solution for accidents or injuries. such as crack bones or wounds. modern science medicine also can cure them but more potential of curing is applicable for alternative treatments.
To sum up, In the view of the arguments outlined above, I can conclude that despite some drawbacks and disadvantages of this trend cannot be ignored. but after carefully consider about these methods,can be use for many areas and findings in the medical world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17843866171 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81109234231 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9709349764 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220558735977 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079712239911 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857494612038 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122708553534 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090486297932 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.