It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, it has become for more countries which have a higher proportion of older people than that of the young ones. In my opinion, this trend has both positive and negative consequences in equal measures.
On the one hand, older people are more experienced and able to contribute to the economic sector. We can see that there are many elderly individuals work as professors, politics, scientific researchers because of their vast knowledge. they could witness the history and reveal to people more than a young adult do. Moreover, in the modern world, as most people are busy at their businesses, older like grandparents can take care of their grandchildren. it means that these children’s parents do not many worries about their child and about the pressure on a cost-living.
On the other hand, due to many older people in a country, they are considered to be a burden to economic perspective. Firstly, an aging population can make a government be under the pressure on the economy because they have to increase the healthcare system, broaden the pension and insurance cost. Therefore, there are many nations force to develop aging labor policies to decrease these situations. Secondly, the more elderly people, the fewer workers in companies. Since young people cannot meet the demand of the labor market, labor force can be suffered because of the shortage of experienced workers who contribute to the company prosperous and to the economic market.
In conclusion, the rising in the proportion of older people can cause both positive and negative angle on society with the reasons I mentioned above.
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but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16541353383 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80741247669 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0169691168 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.692307692 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332945398537 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110239348533 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828137563416 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206545305014 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500441208011 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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