Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money they make.
Is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?
Loss of money in any manner cannot be accepted therefore it is more likely that a business is assessed on the amount of monetary gains. Some people believe that the wealth made in a business is the measurement of one’s success. This essay will discuss whether the wealth is attributed to success and other possible ways to evaluate it.
Businesses are run for making earnings. Today money has become a crucial factor in the measurement of the positive results in any venture. Investments are made into a business mostly expecting returns and the banks or investors are likely to invest only if there are positive results. For instance, the popular CEO of Tesla Company, Elon Musk had an idea, but for that to conceptualize, he has to show the investors and bank the possible yields. People invested in Tesla only after witnessing a demand in the market for electric cars. People backed the idea of I-phone visualizing the demand for smart phones, which was later proved by Apple Company in its profits made by mobile phone segment. Hence, it is completely understandable for measuring monetary gains as the main factor for one’s triumph in business.
There are ventures made for different reasons rather than profits as its main purpose. Investments were made on oil exploration were mainly to find the reservoirs of oil and gas. The money spent is based on the possibility of any findings rather than the returns itself. HP invested in developing operating system software mainly to create dent in the market and become independent from using 3rd party software for its hardware products. Governments invest in public transportation to provide people better infrastructure for commuting to work. These investments are measured in the amount of better service delivered to common people and that they run on the basis of no-profit and no-loss. Therefore, there are instances where success of a business can be evaluated on the purpose of it.
Money is crucial to life as the world operates on the monetary value. This essay explained about other possible ways to measure the profits of a venture stating that the monetary gain is main factor. Overall, the true success of a business is accounted on the purpose it has been set out.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.992 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.713264864 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517333333333 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.638129542 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274599837799 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906965103791 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093559661337 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207030220508 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116637686937 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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