In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
Of late, there has been a colossal upsurge among the prodigies discussing the fact that tourism is quiet beneficial for the developing contries. Critics, however, claim that promtion of tourists industry has done least to improve the ecenomy of the underdeveloped countries. I personally believe that advantages of this statement are more than disadvantages. In this essay, I shall highlight some of the main features of this argument before deducing final conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad of arguments discussing the fact that tourism is very important for developing nations. Firstly, the most conspicuous one stem from the fact that tourism provides the chance to study the history and culture of the nation. In addition, it gives the opportunity to the governments of developing nations to improve their cultural heritage and natural beauty. As a prime example, breathtaking views in Thailand attract tourists from all around the world, which includes, Pattaya and Phi Phi island.
Another, pivotal facet pertaining to this argument is that besides the advantages of tourism there are some disadvantages, which includes language barrier and cultural differences faced by people who visit some developing nations, which sometimes effects the trading between two nations. Therefore this situation would effect the economy of the nation. But these are just rare exception rather common facts.
To recapitulate, forgoing discussion propounds that benefits of tourism in underdeveloped nations triumph over disadvantages.Therefore, ideas that will bring benefit would be cordially welcomed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 240.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72083333333 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11559417822 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629166666667 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0571168917 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210135656402 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643545713643 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547023487308 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112607060309 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401492980881 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.9458128079 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.