Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
Countries from all over the world have dealt with a serious disease harms to children: obesity. This essay will expose the major causes and effects and suggest some measures to this problem.
Ad the society has modernized, people, especially children, are very keen on junk food on account of its convenience. Such fast food as hamburgers, chips, McDonald's and soft drinks are undoubtedly attractive but in fact, it has a lot of poisonous substances which are not healthy. Besides, another main causes leading to younger's obesity is lack of exercise. Children in this modern age tends to spend all day in front of smart electronic devices without joining physical activities. Inactive youngsters might have more dangers to get fat.
Clearly, obesity will result in some serious problems. Youngsters will become overweight, unhealthy and unfit. They may find it difficult to move and do some heavy stuffs. Moreover, it is said that children with obesity may face a higher risk of diseases such as diabetes, heart diseases or even cancer and so on. they will put a strain on hospitals in the future which may be a big trouble to government and other patients.
Because of some mentioned effects above, people need to know how to deal with this problem. Firstly, it is the parents' and government's responsibility to have a regulated rule so that it is able to prevent children from eating too much food, junk food in particular. Secondly, they need to control what children eat and make sure that their kids have a nutrient diet. Finally, children themselves are necessary to restrict the time their spend on playing computer games and take more regular exercises.
To sum up, there is no doubt that obesity is at an alarming rate that need to be solve in this developed period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in fact, in particular, no doubt, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95666666667 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62690988722 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4670274283 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4705882353 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194108298651 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627981360693 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909246814333 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109287708384 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075306406506 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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