Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do
you agree or disagree?
A few decades ago women were restricted to show their talents compared to today. Today women show their presence in all departments as equal to men.I completely disagree that men are portrayed more competitive than ladies.
Firstly, Today, we see copious of girls coming to school for studying compared to earlier days .In fact, in most of the competitive exams like the civil examination, school exam, and many others we see that girls outplay the boys. For example, in the recent NEET exams the top scorers are girls. Moreover, even in civil examinations women have secured the top 5 rankings. Eventually these outcome of this result will lead them in securing top positions in their career.
Secondly, Even in the workplaces we see a trend where women staff are increasing at an alarming rate compared to a decade ago. Women are considered to outsmart men in multitasking jobs since they handle different responsibilities in their life. Indeed, most of the top positions in corporate which were handled by men are now witnessing a change where ladies are also among the top contenders for same positions. For example, the CEO of a multi-million company Pepsi, is a woman,and she has handled the position in a much better way compared to the earlier CEO who was a man. After she has taken up role of CEO the company has grown 15% under her leadership.
To conclude, ladies were restricted to reveal their potentials decades back, now when they got the opportunity to prove they are showcasing that they are equally capable and competitive to men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93155893536 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74527347975 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9046312703 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.083333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126172738561 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490957429651 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737237577112 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883004245022 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739070265287 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.