It is a view of some people that country side is a better place for their children upbringing where as others feel city provides better opportunities for their education, health care etc. However, I feel agree with the statement that country side is a better place to raise our children. In this essay I am going to explain it with my objectivity in following paragraphs.
To begin with, country side has clean enviorment, with green fields providing pleasant view and fresh air to breath in. It enhances our respiratory system and keep the health issues at bay. Secondly, lack of traffic, those people who are concerned with the safety issues it is best place to live in. Fewer number of vehicles and scattered settlements leads to low traffic. So, children can walk on streets without any danger of accidents. Thirdly, noise is a most common nuisance of city life, country side provide a safe haven for those who are sick of it. With no offices and companies arround, country side attract low number of visitors, so people living over there can have their peace of mind. Children can concentrate on their education better especially during exam days.
Apart from this, there are many additional benefits of living in the country side. House rents are very low, so it doesnot cause strain on the savings which can be used to provide facilities to children in education and sports. Moreover, size of houses are large comparable to the city counterpart, giving additional playing space to children. In recent studies, it was found that children living in the country side are better in sports than those living in the cities. Further, improved transport facilities has connected them to the cities so person living over here have access to the city facilites such as market, hospitals etc.
In conclusion, health of children is a main concern for parents during their upbringing so country side provide better facilites for them. Things that cannot be purchased by money such as fresh air, clean enviorment, greenery etc are available on country side so people should prefer to live over there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ter place for their children upbringing where as others feel city provides better opport...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...are concerned with the safety issues it is best place to live in. Fewer number of vehic...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: SAFE_HAVEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'haven'.
Suggestion: haven
...ce of city life, country side provide a safe haven for those who are sick of it. With no o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, apart from, i feel, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95750708215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52631187371 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541076487252 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1556064756 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2222222222 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265595550256 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894344824929 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856353424601 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185901248938 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601595023687 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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