In many countries fast food becomes part of life. It affects people's life style and diet as well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion with relevant examples.
Junk food become an essential part of modern societies’ life in many countries. While it has a substantial impact on people’s health and diet. I utterly agree with controlling the dependence on quick meals as main diet.
Fast food no doubt become popular in contemporary communities due to various reasons. Firstly, it is affordable everywhere, easily delivered to workplaces or houses. So, everybody would opt for the feasible ordering of these meals to have it at office or during break time. Secondly, it is time saving for students and workers, and gives them the opportunity to use their time for work or studying or even to entertain. Finally, Fast food companies offer wide range of attractive choices which tempt consumers especially youngsters.
I believe that communities ought to increase the awareness of escalating consumption of fast food and its detrimental impact on people’s health. Governments should impose extra tax on these products. Many health problems become a trend lately among workers and youngsters such as obesity. Moreover, the excessive consumption of processed meat in daily diet raise the number of cancer patients which costs the community vast amounts of money in addition to emotional suffering. However, preparing healthy food needs time and somewhat costly, but it is safer and provides the body with all essential daily needs of minerals and vitamins.
To conclude, in my view the risks of fast food outweigh its benefits, and communities should encourage people to consider healthy diet and abandon the habit of depending on junk food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, no doubt, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34920634921 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92843162225 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3635865973 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203912682475 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637686949659 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537191657067 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129322184228 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686004420967 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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