In many developing countries, there is a problem with a declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?
Air and water pollution are becoming major concerns for the entire world. Especially in developing countries, the continuously growing industrialization and infrastructure attributes heavily towards pollution. So, are there methods available to control this problem? This essay will discuss such ideas that could help alleviate this situation.
Industrialization helps a country grow at a rapid pace but this should not come at the expense of the environment. Like many developed countries, more stringent rules and regulations around operational practices should be introduced by developing countries. For example, a few years ago France created a mandate to replace blast furnace method with less polluting electrical arc furnace for graphite production. This change reduced pollution in their country by approximately 30 percent. Similarly, Singapore created a method to treat industrial waste and make it eco-friendly, thus deeming it safe for dumping into the ocean. Indeed, such practices can create a massive difference in lives of people and everyone sharing the same ecosystem.
Additionally, Infrastructure also plays a major role in development but construction is also one of the major causes of pollution. Developing countries can benefit heavily by following practices introduced by more advanced countries which reduce this unwarranted side effect. For example, in the early 2000, Canada introduced a method of dust proof construction, where they add a custom solution to the material being used which helps reduce dust by up to 70 percent. Similarly, Germany developed block method for creating bridges. In this method, creation of all the components occur in a confined and less polluting place which are later joined together in water like Lego blocks. This method has been effective in nullifying water pollution caused while constructing bridges. Developing countries can take inspiration or even directly copy such methods to control pollution in their respective countries.
In conclusion, this essay discussed solutions for air and water pollution caused by industries and ever-increasing construction. While introducing highly strict rules and regulation can help improve the pollution caused by industries; using more advanced and efficient methods can help deal with the problems caused by construction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76811594203 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16482186837 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576811594203 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6874213416 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.736842105 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209440840284 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071085613394 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474972237642 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149839776556 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384099563374 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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