Importance of right balance of work and other aspects of life
In this modern era,there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the right balance between work and other aspect's of one's life. While some people argue that it is difficult to balance these aspects in real life, on my point of view it isessential to keep some time for family life. In this essay, I shall discuss on my arguement while discussing both side of the arguement.
First and foremost, people should keep some time for their family because parents need to look after their children at the same time spouses also require time for a healthy relationship. For example, if someone is always busy with work he will not have to understand the issues and difficulties of their spouse and family which would finally end up with family break ups. Therefore, people should manage their time effectively and efficiently, to spend some time with family and relatives.
On the other hand, people face difficulties in managing time because of their unscheduled life style. For instance, traffic time would also cut off valuable time of people and unhealthy relationship with the subordinates and superiors may also increase the work load of each person. Moreover, some people are egoistic at their behaviour, they are self centered and consider only on themselves, irrespective of the impacts on others, consequentl, the problematic situation become into a worst situation.
In conclusion, it is recommended to impose labour laws to minimize the working time in order to save some time for their families. Governments can also improve the infrastructure facilities to save people's time which is wasted on roads. Finally, each individual bears the responsibility of scheduling their office work and domestic issues to avoid chaotic circumstances in both the places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2027972028 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83165841918 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4021122104 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162903423465 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742339356736 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113745602467 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116879063194 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118923584435 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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