-It is said that "Not everything that is learned is contained in books".
It is believed that books have many information. Throughout history, all the information which discover newly become to books. Moreover, even if ancient people did not invent the paper, they wrote to leafs, cave’s walls their knowledge. And also, there is experience in other side. Experiences are not gained, so they only stay theoretic. Because of this reason, we can not find everything in book and also, we need to practice with experience. We can notice in our life in school or young life and business or adult life.
To start with, we always learn theoretic information in book along school life. We read many book about life and lectures. And also, these knowledges are useful and enough for our young life. For example, one guy, who graduated mechanical engineer, is learn all theoretic information from book and lecture. Therefore, he pass the exam and he prove himself for his qualification. Thus, theoretic information, which is benefitted for education, can give good school life.
In addition to this, there is business life or adult life. Actually, this is where theoretical knowledge finish mostly. In business life, experience is worth gold. And also, you can see these experiences in books, but all of them base on theoric.You need live experiences because the books only have how should it going on but there is no which problems can be faced with people’ behavior and environment. Hence, this is really experience and you can not find in book.
To sum up, theoretic knowledge, which base on book is gold key but real experience is everything and it is not found any book. As a result, we should notice this difference and we should prepare according to this real in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
It is believed that books have many information. Throughout history, all th...
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Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
It is believed that books have many information. Throughout history, all the informatio...
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Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Moreover, even if ancient people did not invent the paper, they wrote to leafs, c...
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Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'many books'.
Suggestion: many books
...tion in book along school life. We read many book about life and lectures. And also, thes...
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Line 2, column 252, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
..., who graduated mechanical engineer, is learn all theoretic information from book and...
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Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'proves'.
Suggestion: proves
...ure. Therefore, he pass the exam and he prove himself for his qualification. Thus, th...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
... books, but all of them base on theoric.You need live experiences because the books...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ave how should it going on but there is no which problems can be faced with people...
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Line 3, column 434, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
... and environment. Hence, this is really experience and you can not find in book. To sum u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, as a result, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94097222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72770626391 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538194444444 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7857120073 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.15 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 3.4128256513 440% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0885064153672 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322273249118 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437680726337 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637268635823 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209979334765 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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