Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I strongly disagree with this statement. Young people are also enthusiasts and individuals tend to be more updated when compared to others. Each and every one of them does research to a certain extent in either way to get adequate or surplus knowledge on the important decisions that determine the future of society. they are well aware of the current standings and other pledges which were made earlier and didn't serve the whole purpose it was supposed to. The younger veins make them think faster and analyze the drawbacks before taking any sort of decision.
It's agreed that experience also matters a lot while imparting such sentences but people gain experience if and only they were allowed to adhere to the facts. For example, my friend is a businessman and he lacks experience since he first stepped into his father's job. The society initially found his judgments were merely insane and should be stopped. Despite all the haters and failures, my friend rose up with good rules that made the surrounding to think that he is way more intelligent than all of us. The fact inferred here is, it all depends on the perception of the watchers. if they feel the youth are not matured enough, then whatever the best done by them will remain unnoticed and criticized.
youth politics is something that needs to be welcomed. It's not that any citizen is jumping to make wise decisions of his own choice. To make such one and own the responsibility, tremendous research has to be done. Students have the potential to admire it. With strong manpower and mental strength, they can change the economic development of the future society. The system will be totally changed and then all the departments will be governed by subject matter experts of the same. this will add more development to our economy, trade benefits and financial growth will be consistent.
At the initial stages, it will be appearing to be hard to accept these decisions but later on, people and the future society will realize the core benefit of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'Each one'.
Suggestion: Each one
...e more updated when compared to others. Each and every one of them does research to a certain exte...
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Line 1, column 318, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...s that determine the future of society. they are well aware of the current standings...
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Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...her pledges which were made earlier and didnt serve the whole purpose it was supposed...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'since the first'?
Suggestion: since the first
...s a businessman and he lacks experience since he first stepped into his fathers job. The socie...
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Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ends on the perception of the watchers. if they feel the youth are not matured eno...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Youth
...ll remain unnoticed and criticized. youth politics is something that needs to be ...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...is something that needs to be welcomed. Its not that any citizen is jumping to make...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... by subject matter experts of the same. this will add more development to our econom...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ent. At the initial stages, it will be appearing to be hard to accept these decisions bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84682080925 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53688912026 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592485549133 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7722949892 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2631578947 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2105263158 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120915706529 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365663066056 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428818252062 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077970187314 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038741332077 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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