In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In a few nations, increasing weight is becoming a common problem for the human being. Obesity effects on people's physical condition and fitness. Eating unhealthy food is the main cause of growing weight. I will explain in brief in my upcoming paragraph that what is reason effect behind the rising weight of people and give some possible measures to overcome this problem
To start with, people are eating more junk food today. As scientific research, unhealthy foods are cause for the increasing overweight. For example, Last two years, fast food shops are being increased rapidly. Many people eat foods such as pizza, burger, and sandwich, which leads to obesity and surge in their weight that causes their health level. Furthermore, people are becoming lazy more and more due to technology. Information technology is the second big cause for the rising bodyweight to humans. For instance, nowadays, We can reply by sitting at a place. If people want to give their response to other people, they use the online source such as Whatsapp and Email. Moreover, we can do anything without hard work due to technology.
On the other hand, there are several solutions to stop an unusual weight. One of them, the best way to control to eat fast food is that increase food prices. If the government increases the price of fast food, people will less attractive to fatty foods. the second solution is that exercise is the best way to keep up the body. Regular exercise is essential in maintaining a healthy body. Exercise burns calories and helps to build healthy bones and muscles. The government should take a step against this problem. For example, the government builds a free gym and yoga class. Thereby, people think, if we get a free service related to maintaining our body, Why do we not take advantage of it.
In conclusion, most people nowadays lead a sedentary lifestyle so they should have to understand related overweight and take seriously about it. The government should create a free camp and health centre where people will know about how to keep up our bodies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92877492877 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51302400478 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561253561254 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5812671862 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2173913043 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2608695652 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73913043478 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239077444386 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595888972918 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477670123132 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138266285333 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759931200097 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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