In many countries, not enough students are choosing to study science subjects. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society.
Although most prosperous nations around the world have experienced the fast-paced development of technology, the rest faces the challenge that only a minority of students study science subjects in university. This circumstance brings about numerous profound impacts on humans and factors contributes to this trend should be taken into account which I demonstrate in this essay.
The predominant factors results in the situation that students bypass science subjects to opt for other fields are threefold. firstly, the driving force behind this trend is gender discrimination since only boys are allowed to study, especially science while girls are compelled to stay at home and treated as a breadwinners and housewives. Secondly, students are in favour of other subsets since they can expand their career prospects and gave them a chance to climb up the career ladder faster in order to have a decent living condition. For instance, instead of science, students have a tendency to choose business which is popular in most countries with high salaried and straight forward to seek for a job or set up their own business. The last primary contributor is that only competent as well as intelligence students can absorb knowledge, acquire advanced techniques and give outstanding performance in science so that just a few can meet this entrance requirement.
There are no doubt that there are countless detrimental effects stem from those causes I expressed above. In terms of environment, there will be lack of scientists to struggle with the challenge of climate change, one of the issues should take the priority other aspects of life. moreover, this situation also pose a threat to human’s health since there is not enough scientists to seek for cures for acute diseases, by no means people can face strange sickness arising in recent days. For instance, Alzheimer is a common disease make elderly reduce metal agility and memory and it becomes the norm among aging population and without research carried out by scentits, by no means this ailment can disappear. Needless to say, without scientists and science subjects, it seems that developing countries should suffer out-of-date techniques and take a long time to catch up with the world.
In conclusion, there are several causes aiding this unwanted outcomes so that the burden of responsibility lies in hands of government and individual to solve this problem or at lease reduce the effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25190839695 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82118879946 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595419847328 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.8641420696 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.769230769 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2307692308 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127792038638 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442254025904 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249340841539 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673996308411 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239542626541 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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