You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
Hi John,
how you have been? hope this letter finds you well. With heavy heart, I have to own up that, wrist watch which I have borrowed from you last week got accidentally damaged yesterday.
I apologize for the what happened, but that was sudden and inevitable. Two days back, while traveling back to home from my office on bike, I met with a small accident. Luckily, there were no serious injury. However, watch get smashed with stone and protected glass shatter in pieces, but fortunately watch was functioning accurately. I know how precious that watch is for you as its was a gift from your parents on your recent birthday. I felt so bad and I wish I could avoid this miserable incident.
I have given your watch in shop to fix the broken glass and they will return it after two days. Trust me, once it's repaired, it will look same as new and then I'll give it back to you.
I hope you can understand the situation and forgive me.
With regards,
Paras
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi John, how you have been? hope this letter find...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Hi John, how you have been? hope this letter finds you well. With heavy ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould avoid this miserable incident. I have given your watch in shop to fix th...
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Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ired, it will look same as new and then Ill give it back to you. I hope you can ...
^^^
Line 8, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nderstand the situation and forgive me. With regards, Paras
^^^^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation and forgive me. With regards, Paras
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52272727273 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36276207607 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9561009565 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2307692308 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311381066582 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962375166398 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868961930697 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163536970697 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721014786205 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.