The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.
The process graph depicts the process of trapping heat and greenhouse gases on the earth from the sun.
Overall, The air several steps illustrated in the diagram by trapping the heat from the sun and increase an account of such hazardous gases in atmosphere by human activities.
Firstly, heat from the sun reaches to the earth. Some amount of heat reflect back to the space while remaining part of heat is trapped by cloud of greenhouse gases. But some energy directly reverse from the atmosphere. This is a natural process, but in recent decades human activities led to an increase in the level of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere.
There are several human activities which tend to rise in the level of greenhouse gases. Some factories and industries release carbon dioxide into the air. This gases released from the private cars and lorries. Lastly, trees are only the key reason for reducing the level of this gases. Although, during this time period, it iscut for expanding urban facilities and land so, it called deforestation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he key reason for reducing the level of this gases. Although, during this time perio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 871.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00574712644 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57341023093 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6236254245 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1818181818 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282787136891 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107885055231 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894447859235 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199536408207 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805290381465 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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