you can better education from experience is better from classroom

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you can better education from experience is better from classroom

When hiring top manager as chief executive manager , general manager to run a business , employer choose between having high experience more than five years as same position and holding high degree such ad PHD or master degree with less experience years. In other mean higher education , higher performance versus higher experience ,higher performance .

holding high experience manage company as same manner as previous institute . they use same method to recognize high performance. Almost , they success in getting over traditional risk , imply target and obtain high income. In such case , successful come from their experience in solving same situation. It sound good in rapid unchangeable environment with expected risk with certainty.This is often occurs in undeveloped countries possessing bad education system and unqualified skills.

In another side , employer prefer holding high degree .they argue that holding high degree can perform with unusual matter , make up new idea to over come problem, avoid expected and unexpected risk . seldom, holding degree fall to success. This is always happen in culture having unopened mind who imply method learned in classroom without consider economic condition , countries law and regulation , governance and other standard.

In summary , education getting from experience is as important as education from classroom. employer have to balance between them , possessing education from experience , often used in traditional situation , solving known problem which happened actually , moreover, utilize incredible manner to manage unexpected event occurring due to the fast return environment coming with unexpected high risk .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, moreover, so, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 242.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89256198347 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87243400546 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7101700048 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175551605055 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800412031421 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123164181257 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11856647639 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947358335754 0.0645574589148 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 58.1214874552 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.1575268817 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 10.9000537634 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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