The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

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The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months.

The table chart depicts data of 6800 Scottish people who take part in diverse cultural activities in last year.

It is clear that performance in any activities were the most popular during while computer based had the least member who performing in activities.

As the graph shows, younger people between age of 16-24 do in any activities at 35% which was the highest over the period since for 25-44 at 22% and for 45-74 at 17% in earlier 12 month. By contrast, computer based had the lowest number of dweller for all age group and overall percentage stood at 6% in last year. Furthermore, there was only 11% and 17% participants of age 16-24 and 25-24 in undertaking any crafts and cultural purchases respectively. In addition, only 22% aged people took part in undertaking any crafts compared to 18% in cultural activities.

Moreover, in terms of any visual arts, figure for 16-24 people accounted for about at 30% that was higher than any writing activities at 17% for similar age group. Afterwards, 6% and 9% dwellers had spent their leisure time in any visual activities and any writing respectively. The proportion for over 16 age people experienced a same percentage for above mentioned categories.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
... 22% and for 45-74 at 17% in earlier 12 month. By contrast, computer based had the lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, well, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95588235294 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75007863996 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9608770052 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182259052569 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904641854882 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516070092859 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128227043865 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673147412634 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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