Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Submitted by Chims on Sat, 06/01/2019 - 06:50

Although it is believed that it is best to take up miserable conditions like unsatisfying job or having insufficient money, others still think that upgrading such conditions is far much better. In my opinion, improving a poor situation facilitates an individual to quickly acquire gratification.

On the one hand, some people consider that it is suitable to cope with undesired circumstances because they have a belief that patience pays. Firstly, they have confidence that experience is gained by staying on the same job for a longer period. Consequently they will be promoted as well as paid handsomely since employers reward long serving workers. For example, it has been found that most companies consider veteran workers for promotion. Secondly, this group also believe that if they accept miserable situations, they can live stress free lives. Therefore, they choose to be satisfied with whatever they have until opportunities knock at their doors.

On the other hand, there is a group that believe that in order to quickly get satisfaction, miserable state of affairs should be improved in time. I agree with this view. In other words, they feel that misery can not be ended unless some steps to stop it have been taken and implemented. For instance, several researches have indicated that most successful people do not accept bad situations instead they always find an escape route. This evidence is somehow adequate to prove that walking out of unsatisfying circumstances is actually a better option of the two.

In conclusion, I have agreed that changing an ugly situation helps people to be successful in life than taking those situations as acceptable.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22304832714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88015575802 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635687732342 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0181974004 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1428571429 7.06120827912 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166014178 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539441147757 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459199663379 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108569606935 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675984534076 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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