Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
According to a recent studies, the amount of feminists are increasing. An example can be seen by a recent law passed by the Delhi government of making bus rides and metro rides free for women. This shows us the rise in support for gender equality. Most of these acts have shut down the long tradition of suppressing women. However, people fail to consider a few facts about human anatomy.
The process which started with a few microbes in water and ended with a complex creature called as human is known as evolution.This evolution plays a great part in a particular individual's abilities. The absence of tail and presence of an opposing digit has deep and arcane reason. Similarly, even among same species, the two genders have different abilities. In ancient times, women were the child-bearers and homemakers while men were the food gatherers and protectors. Where women lacked in physical strength, they had to make up in mental ability. A woman can easily carry out a mentally heavy task but may fail to carry out a physical task and vice-versa for men. Hence for a long time women were made to do household work and were labelled 'emotional' of the lot, while men were supposed be the brawns of the lot.
However, we easily forget what history has taught us. We are not who we were before. Every generation, our species - along with others - has evolved, this generation will too. Women have recently, in past 20 - 30 years or so, have started to become independent and have started to treated equally. Similarly for men, they have started to embrace their emotional side and started using their brains. This shows that, even if it doesn't seem like women and men have equal abilities, future generations are going to be same, mentally or physically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 302.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80463576159 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5773620133 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8636565196 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6111111111 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176883832033 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467996839799 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493387435112 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112563459457 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218954333358 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.