Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be build instead. Do you agree or disagree?
Growing more trees and plants is essential to keep the atmosphere free of pollution and cool. It has been considered by some individuals that unoccupied land in cities and towns should be covered by planting more trees whereas, others believe that accommodation amenities should be developed on free space. In my opinion, I agree with the former statement.
There are many reasons which prove that growing trees is beneficial than building new houses on land in cities and towns. One of them is that nowadays, air pollution is one of the major problem faced by multiple nations and no doubt, cities and towns are greatly affected by this problem as these are overly populated places due to the availability of facilities, for instance, hospitals, education institutes, shopping malls and super markets which results in more traffic. The vehicles on the road emit CO2 which is one of the major contributor in depleting the air. So, trees ought to be planted because they absorb CO2 gas and releases O2 into the atmosphere making the air clean.
Another reason is that by planting more trees, the temperature of the surrounding area would be reduced to great extent. Due to increase in traffic, atmosphere of the cities and towns has became very warm and to get rid of hot climate, residents prefer to use air-conditioner which is not a good practice as the gases produced by AC are depleting environment as well as have detrimental effects on the human health. If trees would be planted then, these will help in cooling the atmospheres eliminating the need of using air-conditioner and people would be able to experience fresh natural air.
To conclude, more trees should be planted to conserve the environment and to make it fit for living rather than building houses to provide shelter to more people in free places in cities and towns because problem of building more houses for over-growing population can be solved by building skyscrapers which provide shelter to more people using small piece of land but there is no other option instead of growing more trees and plants to save the nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... atmosphere of the cities and towns has became very warm and to get rid of hot climate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94632768362 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70503052539 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516949152542 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.315584631 49.4020404114 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.181818182 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1818181818 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318913375408 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120753126021 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928035438381 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208740066139 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695293994445 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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