Some students have rented the apartment next to yours. Their parties are upsetting you, your family and other tenants.
Dear Sir/Madame, good afternoon
By this letter, I would request your actions on the following issue. A couple of students have dwelled close to our apartment two weeks ago. They produce a lot of noise behind permanent parties which they organize almost every evening. I was trying to negotiate the problem directly to them but faced to impolite behavior from their side.
Above all, these parties disturb me and my relatives such as wife and children because we cannot sleep well while loud music plays or somebody cries. Furthermost, I fill tired after that and get upset in terms of low productivity on the job. Moreover, my eldest son is going to have an exam at school, but a loud sound influences to him negatively. He is not able to concentrate effectively and I worry of a result he will show on an exam.
In those reasons, I would like to ask your help to investigate the problem more thoroughly and proceed with respective actions to reduce the parties. Unless I would complain to the police department directly if the situation does not change.
I am looking forward to your prompt response and truly believe in your further collaboration.
Yours faithfully,
Maxim Azmuka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ave an exam at school, but a loud sound affects him negatively. He cannot concentrate e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81420765027 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5940461096 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.748633879781 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.5235744197 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.4166666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130132473937 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039658857181 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367284444693 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052850637664 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507600770733 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.