Some people believe that homicide can not be justified by killing the offender, instead life imprisonment is better. I strongly agree with this view because some people commit this crime unintentional.
Most people who have been accused of murder lack the intent. In other words, they could have killed while giving a corporal punishment to a misbehaving child. For instance, in Zimbabwe a parent was acquited of murder charge after the court examined the case and found that the child died after being hit on a sensitive area in the course of being disciplined. Clearly, this showed that not all people are killed intentionally. Therefore, killing the offender is actually ruthless.
Another reason why jail sentencing is a better option is that, the state can benefit through cheap labour from these prisoners. To illustrate this, in most countries, people who are charged with crime of killing human beings are convicted for long jail time with hard labour. In fact, they work in farms owned by Government for no payment. In contrast, if there is capital punishment, authorities would lose a lot of money in hiring of farm workers. Thereby, keeping the killer inmates alive is of benefit to the nations and the entire populations.
To conclude, I have completely accepted that killing of the people detained for murder is merciless since most of the cases proved that there was no evidence of aiming to kill. Furthermore, if these convicts are not killed, they can be utilised in national areas of production for free
- Researches show that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, the advertisements of food products should be banned in the same way as cigarettes advertising is banned in many countries.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of their children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, whileothers think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both viewsand give your own opinion. 61
- By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty for committing murder therefore life in prison is better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example 61
- Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t countries, people who are charged with crime of killing human beings are convic...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04743083004 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66584308758 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2792586771 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2142857143 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160264854418 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498768404074 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350408888964 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976347173322 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149450356659 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.