An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
In pas few years with advent of technology purchasing things online has become a trend and it is increasing each day. In the following essay we discuss about various advantages and disadvantages on this trend.
Due to the widespread of internet, it has become easier for any one to shop online as shopping companies have come up with mobile apps which makes consumers easier to shop anything, anywhere on their finger tips. This saves an ample amount of time which his usually wasted in crowded malls. For instance, it took me 1 hour just in billing queue when I recently visited the mall. Apart from that, time spent to commute to the shopping mall reduces as most online shop delivers at your door step. Moreover, It helps saving fuel, parking fees at malls and from city traffic.
As every this has its disadvantages, online shopping does as well. In many occasions it has found that shopping for clothes online is not a good idea, as you may not feel the texture of cloth and sizes may vary depending on the brands. Furthermore, product pictures and real product may vary. For example, recently I ordered a blue pair of jeans, but when I received it the color was not exactly the same which was being advertised.
In conclusion, with above merits and demerits, online shopping hold great importance these days. Overall its great experience to shop online anything from any part of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
...s at your door step. Moreover, It helps saving fuel, parking fees at malls and from ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, moreover, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78189300412 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47091156995 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646090534979 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5835760211 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3846153846 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0305226605868 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0131989475344 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270761718765 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0247958089066 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036095024822 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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