Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine
These days some of the society believed in a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine and bring up some opinions, such as at best these methods are ineffective and at worst the may be dangerous. There are both advantages and disadvantages for patients who decided to heal their disease with alternative medicine. In this essay I completely agree that alternative medicine gives more drawbacks rather than the benefits for several cases.
In the one hand, the main benefit of relying on alternative medicine is it looks at overall health of body which focuses on healing pain and disease by balancing out other aspects of life and adjusting traditional potions. Life aspects reviewed which are sleep hours, daily nutrition, and stress so the treatment is adjusting the patient’s condition. For example, when an elder man suffers a sore foot, the alternatives medicine practitioners recommend the patient to have acupuncture on the specific spot and give a daily traditional potion. As the result, the pain will a little bit healed after applied those remedies. So it is too important to try alternative remedies but we need to reconsider the side effects after treatment routinely.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks of using alternative medicine which is potentially dangerous interactions. Even though the potion product contain no artificial substances, supplements, and herbs can still possibly interact with prescription and scientific medication and actually some of natural products have side effect in the long run of their own. For instance, when a gastric disease sufferer routinely consume traditional herb which contains several substances that potentially interact with extrinsic compounds and causing acute illness on another organ due to dangerous interaction. Therefore, after a long run consuming the traditional herbs it will raises such as dependency on it and bring up dangerous interactions with extrinsic compounds. So there is no doubt that wr can’t rely our diseases on alternative medicine due to its dangerous interactions in a long term.
In conclusion, from right here I stand that I don’t believed that alternative medicine is a good solution to remedies any kinds of disease. In my opinion, it gives more bad impacts for the patients rather than the benefits. For the solution it is a clear to consult our illness to doctors as a scientific medicine practitioners to prevent potentially a long term dangerous side effects
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'alternatives'' or 'alternative's'?
Suggestion: alternatives'; alternative's
...n an elder man suffers a sore foot, the alternatives medicine practitioners recommend the pa...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... potion. As the result, the pain will a little bit healed after applied those remedies. So...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'raise'
Suggestion: raise
...consuming the traditional herbs it will raises such as dependency on it and bring up d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33924050633 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04379189886 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53417721519 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4118971573 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.8125 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6875 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22136659576 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714661360355 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785517621876 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139800960094 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862408402992 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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