People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress?
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
it is inevitable to escape from the stress in this fast-moving society. In order to release that stress, people are searching and design the best way that can easily get rid of the stress. Among the categories of the means to release stress, I think exercise is the great ways of escaping from the stress with the few following reasons.
it is possible to forget the moment of the stressful situation with the excercise. think the time you have worked out after work or you feel lazy. The moment you do work out is arduous but you can more concentrate on your work without having less stress after you do some exercise. While people are doing exercise, they merely focus on sports or the activities they do. Furthermore, according to the research of Health Association center, body surprisingly feel more comfort when the lactic acid (acid that come out when the muscle feel tire) is released. excercise assist not only people can deal with the stress in psychological way but it also possible by physical way.
In addition, it is cost effective than other activities. sports require only your body. Running or sport playing with ball require few equipment for the several games. For the book reading, however, every times when people are trying to reduce stress, they otherwise can get more stress with the reason of cost they have to pay. The cost of book is quite expensive and it gives disposable satisfaction. The gardening is also line with the same context. The place and trees are need to be equiped for the garden work.
it will be impossible to live this society without having stress. however, with the exercise, people can intentionally forget moment and reduce the burden that body get through the stress with the less cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, while, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84333333333 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44406537465 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8659309324 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7222222222 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316221302001 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950824510085 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810584435219 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190237384611 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772232343011 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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