You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In the letter
• give details about the concert
• describe how you won the tickets
• explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Clara,
I'm writing to let you know that I've won two concert tickets for this weekend, and I was wondering if you wanted to come with me.
It is Stone Tulip concert at Opera House in Cairo city center, and it opens its door at 7 o'clock but I think we don't have to attend this early there because the gig isn't scheduled to start until 9 o'clock.
To win the tickets, I had to call Cairo Eye radio show and answer a small question about the concert but I had also to be the caller number hundredth. Fortunately, I tried twice but there was no way and when I got through all conditions were met and I answered correctly and that is it!
Anyhow, when I got this award, I recalled the good old days memories when we used to listen to this concert together. I know how you're so passionate about such events. My sister would like to come with me but I'm sure she has no interest at all in this genre of art and that is why I found it a golden opportunity for me and you to catch up.
If you agree to come, let me know as soon as possible.
Best regards
Mark
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10952380952 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17228992941 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9114080222 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190090761871 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809149284599 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788671390564 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110524344397 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908563903063 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 70.7449484536 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.