Why School Should Require Wearing School Uniforms
Newspapers are full of stories about school uniforms that students wear before going to school. It is important to address the subject of wearing school uniform, which results in economic, social, and psychological harm effects on the students and families. Some countries have school uniform's policy, that consider defining a color and design. As a result, students are therefore obliged to abide by the rules of uniforms. That may be true but, school uniforms must not be chosen by school because students will not be disciplined just because wearing uniform, some parent could not afford uniforms' price, and student have to select their clothes by themselves for keeping student’s right to freedom of expression in order to fit with their body shape and build self-confidence.
Some people think it is important for students to wear uniforms at school because costume will students encourage discipline and get more success. That may be somewhat true but, uniform cannot give those values to students because they should have earned those values when they were four years old by learning parents to them. Also, there are a lot of ideal students who do not wear uniforms; however, they better than the most of students who commit with costume. To quote Mr. Ryan Yeung ''The results do not suggest any significant association between school uniform policies and achievement.'' It is true because there are more reasons to be success not by wearing uniforms for example work hard and make plan to earn your aims.
It is often claimed that uniforms are increased more business favor merchants. Also, there will be having a strong competition between markets and getting good deals with schools to provide uniforms at markets. While there may be some truth in that view, may be some markets will monopolize the uniform, so it is hard for parent since prices will not be affordable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
...uniforms; however, they better than the most of students who commit with costume. To quote Mr. R...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 311.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06752411576 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55389280548 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540192926045 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8103093385 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.230769231 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308968360771 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138103915914 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102458829332 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221688719779 0.150856017488 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091621040528 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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