Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
There are tones of a different view on the question of whether artists should be much more freedom to enhance their imaginative thoughts or not. Some people believe that artists should communicate their considered opinion without any limited condition. However, I feel that artists should be liberated completely in expressing their ideas.
One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that human should be free without any harmless to others. If artists are allowed to explain their views liberty on society, they are more likely to achieve success in their careers and can create lots of gorgeous art of works, therefore, I believe that these types of liberalism not only will it help make durable artistic products, but they also impress the people by their amazing ideas that can be sometimes changed their life. For instance, the directors have some super concepts which illustrated accurately in their movies without any complexity and complication among the folks. This sorts of a film should be useful for improving the conception of society and life by focusing on social issues and life.
However, perhaps the strongest argument in favor of banning artists and other people want to change the view of humanity around the world is that of governments. Their contents of creation may contain opposite advertising against governments which make a commotion on societies. For example, some artists attempt to explain social issues and especially economic issues lead to lots of gaps between rich and poor people. Paying attention to all these issues make a huge group of people dissatisfy than their governments.
To conclude, the artist should be full of freedom in expressing their ideas but the government should control them for the useful production and protect the people from negative consequences of their work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20469798658 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61998887332 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56711409396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4430996683 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.25 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272320727035 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111525226444 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744380264604 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196625190217 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849240784507 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.