a Nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is said to be the foundation of any individual's life. Therefore, it is important for any nation's goverment to have a good education system leading to better foundation of the citizens eventally having a strong community of people. Hence, it becomes an important topic of discussion for the education in any nation. As it is said that a nation should require all of its student to study same national curiculum until they enter college is likely to agree but a few points must be kept in mind.
If we suppose that all the students throughout the nation has same curiculum then the quality of students education throughout the country will be same which may result into a better harmony between the schools of different states.this will ensure that no student in any state will be deprived of a good quality education. no city will be having a inferior quality of education whether it be the urban, sub urban or rural city.
It will arouse a sense of faith in the people towards the goverment of the nation as they will see them as a goverment which is impartial against the people of country. It will reduce the interstate conflicts on education system also. This will produce a harmony between the goverment and people of nation and result in nation
Furthermore, many students for better education may have to migrate to more developed cities. Introduction of system like this will not force them to migrate and have the same quality education throughout the nation. This also supports the right to education to every student of the country.
Introduction of this will also ensure that the admission in colleges are based on the same quality of education provided to students. This will hence nullify the standards for admission.
If the education is same and of a better quality, it may increase the quantity of students atending schools and continuing further college as well. It will show a decline in the number of dropouts from schools every year. This will eventually create a better educated society.
But on the contrary to this, the lack of healthy competition between the schools to create the best quality students will also slowly disappear and then no extra efforts will be seen. This may also hamper the creativity of schools for creating better curiculum as they will have a national curriculum given to be followed.
Hence, the scheme of same national curiculum is a good idea but it may require a little more attention to some points discussed here.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion: No
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87470449173 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62574438702 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416075650118 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4207086334 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.526315789 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253946488523 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881105953145 0.0831039109588 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122879790564 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124291782942 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877669535311 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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