Some people think that art is essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.
It is argued that art is a significant subject or it is a waste of time.This essay will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, it is undoubted truth that art is an enjoyable subject.Firstly, it is true that children who learn art may develop their creativity. For instance, If you give the children a paper, they will create anything that they imagine, this will lead to better thinking. Secondly, art is necessary to children, which helps them relax.It is really beneficial and comfortable to learn art after some important classes such as math or science.Learning art partly diminishes their stress.
On the other hand, some people point out that art is a waste of time.This can be attributed to a host of reasons.Children should force to learn some complicated or mandatory subjects like biology or science.This is because it will help them in their career in the future. One example,it is the hardship for artist nowadays to find a stable job with the high salary compare with the others who are scientists or biologists. Nowadays,in modernizing life, technology has gained popularity.Some people argued that children should be taught some subjects related technology instead of learning some worthless subjects which should be replaced.It is truth of by using science and technology, the scientists invented Internet, which is a remarkable improvement in our life.It is undeniable that more and more important inventions will be invented by people who study science and technology.
In conclusion,although art is essential subject for overall growth of a person,it is more important to learn some significant subjects related to modern technology, which help children in career growth .In my opinion,it is better to consider art as an optional subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21403508772 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17950887725 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522807017544 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.269447537 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.75 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.625 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.75 7.06120827912 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186365207594 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941806537118 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371787523658 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133224011189 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148801224191 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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