Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
Some would argue that having pets at home is beneficial for children whereas others say that these in-door animals are a threat to children’s health. While keeping pets makes children happy, I believe that they will have a high risk of getting injured by their own animals.
On the one hand, adorable pets, such as dogs and cats, will bring joy and comfort to any child at home. This is to say, unlike toys and dolls which are lifeless, these pets are living animals which actually interact and play with children just like their parents or peers. Therefore, they will find it more fun in the same way that they have friends who accompany them at home. For example, a study in Vietnam showed that children, who owned a cat, smiled more frequently compared to those who did not have any pets. However, I feel that children will face the risk of getting attacked by their own animals.
On the other hand, keeping pets at home means that children are in danger of being injured by these animals. Although pets are tamed and trained, they still possess their natural instinct to react to some human actions which they consider as threats and one of the most annoying habits of children is pulling animals’ fur. Hence, pets will attack and injure children when they feel abused. For instance, Cho Ray hospital in Ho Chi Minh City has reported numerous cases of children getting wounded severely while playing with their dogs at home. I believe that keeping pets can be life-threatening to children.
In conclusion, despite that a pet is a friend who brings more happiness to children, there is always a risk of them being bitten or clawed by their own dogs or cats.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74061433447 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37187369145 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556313993174 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.539365688 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.846153846 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178803591787 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776699790937 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497572475533 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123095969248 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061413957036 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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