Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.
Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,
A) Introduce yourself
B) Explain what the problem is
C) Suggest solutions
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the inconvenience caused due to the ongoing road work in the area of Village Green.
I am Nilesh Shah and currently living in the said area. As a Civil engineer by profession, I am delighted with your decision of expanding the narrow roads in the crowded neighborhoods of the city.
As the road work is progressing throughout the day and night, the loud noises coming from the heavy machinery and concrete trucks are producing lot of sound pollution and it is impacting to the local residents of my area. Therefore, people are finding difficult to sleep at night, in addition, lack of sleep is affecting both the students and working professionals to a great extent.
Being a Civil engineer, I would like to recommend solution to this sound problem. It is highly possible to meet the project deadline in time even if you stop nightshift work, which is between 10 p.m to 7 a.m. To achieve this, stop night shift work and put the people working at night into the morning shift. As a result of this, the available resources for the day shift will be doubled and you would be able to achieve required work to be done for a day in the day shift only.
I hope you would give immediate attention to this matter. I would highly appreciate if you could please consider implementing the proposed solution.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mr.Nilesh Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... implementing the proposed solution. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
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Line 16, column 4, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nilesh
...ring from you. Yours faithfully, Mr.Nilesh Shah
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, in addition, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 250.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.768 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67592526054 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5811289946 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183461767187 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064099184699 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0271951253715 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741643457521 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358382938942 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.