The most pressing problem facing inhabitant
Recently, the phenomenon of determining the most pressing diffuclties that exist among settlers and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although traffic conjestion has some catastrophic effects on inhabitants' lives, others believe that unemployment is the most significant predicament that families are dealing with it. I am inclined to believe that unemplyment can be minus as it could increase some detrimental effects for dwellers.
From a social standpoint the idea of identifying the most pressing problem that individuals bear with it provides the society with noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact of governments' responsibilities to meet the initial needs. From my own experience, when I was a pupil university, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these details. Loads of inhabitants asserted that traffic and its correlated impacts are the most difficulty in cities. According to research undertaken by a prestigious university, a considerable amount of time and money is wasted annually in traffic. Furthermore, it leads to increasing the amount of pollution in particular the greenhouse gas emissions including carbon dioxide which is quite hazardous for public health.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that some opponents argue that unemployment and its effects has a major role to increase confrontatins. This issue affect the daily life of majority of population and increase poverty. Deprived families cannot meet their initial needs including housing, health, security, education and entertainment and it leads to divorces, thefts and other crime.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that unemployment is the most paramount problem that citizens are dealing with.
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- Do you? 11
- People usually mix their private and professional life. What are the pros and cons of this? 85
- Large shopping malls are replacing small local shops in cities and towns. In your own experience, is it a positive development? 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'affects'.
Suggestion: affects
...e to increase confrontatins. This issue affect the daily life of majority of populatio...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, in particular, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68029739777 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1800361211 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3074124697 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185557940109 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599920550786 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719737382523 0.071462118173 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106745431622 0.151781067708 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620649662912 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 12.6369458128 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.