Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do you support it or not? (Agree/Disagree)
Today's generation specially youngsters can be easily influenced by anyone and can make them their role models without any special factor in them. I am slightly agreeing to the said statement but disagreeing as well. I will be discussing my points below.
People can be easy followers of either film stars or sports stars because of their glamorous lifestyles. Some people try to copy their dressing sense and some try to copy their bad habits such as drug intake, smoking etc. If some person is chain smoker and that person has started following this kind of superstar, for instance, Shahrukh Khan. In that case, person will definitely be impacted in bad way because of strong influence towards their role model.
The good part is, If someone has started following any superstar because of some good deeds by them say, social activities then this thing will help our society in a good way. It can be related to donations and charities to social organisations such as NGOs. For example, Salman Khan in our country has influenced many people in supporting cancer patients. If he is role model of some person then that person will follow the steps of Salman Khan and will leave an example to the society.
Summing up all this, It can be said that if a person has started following any superstar for good reasons, it will help the society in positive way. Otherwise, the influence towards superstars can have bad impact on youngsters.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...s without any special factor in them. I am slightly agreeing to the said statement but disagreeing a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86178861789 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51227405354 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.478389296 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.25397266985 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14501725857 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590794530657 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706108964105 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831080968475 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404604593507 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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