In many cities, many people are living in large apartment blocks. Does this accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Nowadays, people living in urban areas prefer to reside in the flats of multistory apartment buildings. In my opinion, I believe that this trend has more benefits in terms of effective space utilization, availability of all facilities at one place and security, but with some drawbacks of high cost and small size.
One of the major disadvantage of large apartments is the high cost of living there. Firstly, the purchase price of these flats is beyond the range of a common man, and could be purchased only with the help of bank loans. Secondly, the monthly maintenance expenses such as electrician services, plumbing services, cleaning services and 24-hour electricity and water supply services are fixed, and to be paid in advance. Apart from this, the overall size of each flat is small, and it become difficult to adjust properly for a large family.
Despite the fact of high cost of living, there are number of benefits that one could obtain by staying there. First and foremost benefit is the availability of all facilities and comforts which are necessary for daily routine life are provided under one roof. The facilities such as supermarket, gym, parking and gardens are provided by builders in these type of buildings. Another advantage is the safety and security, as security guards are deployed at main entry gate and in the peripheral of the apartment to avoid any unauthorized entry. Finally, the space is utilized logically and effectively in order to accommodate maximum families, and this is the need of the hour because population is increasing at alarming rate.
In conclusion, although the cost of living is high in these well furnished apartments, it is justified due to the numerous facilities and comforts being provided to the dwellers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08591065292 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79076732849 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3837071502 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136893907559 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528161627537 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601051109695 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783342767861 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356315106531 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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