Some people argue that young people should concentrate on study or work. Some people think it is better to put energy in activities designed to broaden their experience, such as international travel and volunteering. Support with examples or cases.
The importance of _, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The significant influence of _ has sparked the
controversy over the potential impact of this trend on _ in recent years.
It can be agreed that _. Therefore, this essay will elaborate how _ and how _ and thus it will lead to a logical conclusion.
BODY 1:
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why ___, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that
___. As an illustration, a University of Adelaide study has shown that ___. Therefore, ___.
BODY 2:
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which might overwhelm the substantial influence _, but the most alarming one
is rooted in the fact that _. For instance, _. Hence, _.
CONCLUSION:
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the importance of _ is distinguished, (although/and) _ should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gnificant influence of _ has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 31.9359605911 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 1207.87684729 62% => OK
No of words: 134.0 242.827586207 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59701492537 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.92707691288 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13557366717 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 139.433497537 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708955223881 0.580463131201 122% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 379.143842365 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.7891506465 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.12807881773 194% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0322254147874 0.242375264174 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00933554186171 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161426463405 0.071462118173 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0132567150111 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186662437866 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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