Some people say that protecting the environment is the government responsibility.Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it.Discuss both views and give your own examples.
It is argued that government should be accountable for the environment or some are saying that each person should be amendable.From my stand point, it will be more beneficial if both the country's authorities and individuals share the responsibility.
On the one hand, Government may play the pivotal role to maintain the environment safe and healthy.It is authorities that should introduce the legislation in order to alleviate the environmental problems such as air pollution and more.There should be some laws for the factories to move to the country sides rather than staying in cities.This can help urban areas to protect from the poisonous fumes, which are always discharged from firms.Another prominent point is that the Government should educate the citizens to create TV programs to protect the nature more.they should persuade them to take care the nature.
On the other hand, it is certainly true that each person can play an important role to keep the environment clean.Cars are the major source of air pollution.Their exhaust gases contaminate the air , ranging from carbon-di-oxide to unburnt carbon.Therefore, by using their own vehicles only in rare cases,people would be able to protect the environment.Another opportunity available to individuals is recycling.By stopping plastic waste from entering and spoiling waterways people are able to conserve drinkable water and its habitants.
In conclusion, Although Government should secure the nature , nation is also equally responsible for that.It is, therefore,likely that joint efforts of both the governments and their citizens would result in the most effective way of preserving the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56299212598 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38655204319 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.228812176 49.4020404114 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 353.25 106.682146367 331% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.5 20.7667163134 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299757366667 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184621332452 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737022268509 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184621332452 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737022268509 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.5 13.0946893788 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 50.2224549098 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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