Essay topics: People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection. In your letter…
Describe the problem
Explain how they are affecting people.
Say what company should do to help.
Dear sir,
I would like to bring to your notice the issues related to the internet connection in Zone 4. One of them is that, the online connection has fluctuations, which means it stops any time during the middle of the day. Due to the connectivity problem, many of us are unable to meet our routine work with ease. There is a public park which operates fully on internet, that has been kept close for last two days. many of us feel that, recent rains might have hampered the connection, hence it would be great to send a technician to survey the area and find the real cause of the issue.
Finally, I urge you to consider this problem as critical and instruct someone to take complete charge of the aggravated situation and solve this problem.
Yours truly,
Leena
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
... has been kept close for last two days. many of us feel that, recent rains might hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 638.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58992805755 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37604019319 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.73381294964 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6316216889 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137178301583 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588239980663 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258856265836 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778880575657 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404802528322 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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