THERE SEEMS TO BE AN INCREASING NUMBER OF SERIOUS CRIMES COMMITTED EACH YEAR. WHILE SOME THINK THE BEST WAY IS TO USE THE DEATH PENALTY AS A DETERRENT, MANY PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT OTHER MEASURES WILL BE NEEDED.
DISCUSS BOTH SIDES.
There is a rapid incline in severe offenses, which are committed every year. Although it is perceived by one section of society that an optimum solution is to give death sentence to the criminal as a punishment, others consider that there are different steps that can be taken to handle this menace. This essay will elucidate both perspectives of society in the upcoming paragraphs.
On one hand, the verdict of the death sentence is the right method to ameliorate the threatening environment among people. As offenders can get bail easily after arrest for a serious crime, so they commit another crime with detrimental effects on humans. If culprits are sentenced for death, then other criminals are unable to commit crime making fear of themselves in the heart of individuals. For instance, in Assam, one of the states of India, rapists are charged with death penalty, which results in declining a large number of such culprits; hence, women residing over there feel more secure and safe.
On the other hand, there are numerous solutions that can be taken to improve the social condition. Firstly, multifarious job opportunities will be provided to youth for their holistic development and growth, which will stop them from convicting crimes namely robbery, drug trafficking and many more to earn easy money. Secondly, the government can focus on prevention of crime rather than introducing harsher prison or death sentences to offenders. This is only be done by giving rehabilitation and community services to the criminals who are in a prison so that they will not re-offend after releasing from jail.
To conclude, it is believed by some people that death is a rigorous penalty for criminals to halt the crimes; however, others think that numerous steps such as employment opportunities will be taken by the government to overcome serious offenses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ath penalty, which results in declining a large number of such culprits; hence, women residing ov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16831683168 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77149918361 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.873555164 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254223995794 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869734809068 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526858213416 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160393115878 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480298633502 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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