Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
At present, scientific researches across the world are being carried out and monitored sometimes by governments, sometimes by private enterprises. However, it is a matter of debate whether these researches should be undertaken by the former or the latter. From my point of view, it is best that these two aforementioned subjects should cooperate in scientific researches.
There is a strong argument why scientific researches should not be done only by the government, because of these two reasons. Firstly, it is evident that scientific research requires a huge amount of money to be conducted, so that this problem would become an overwhelming burden on the national budget and it could be imbalanced spending if the state improperly invested in such projects. Secondly, there have been many corporations conducting valuable researches for over the past few decades, and the results were quite associated with market needs. This is mainly because private companies are market-oriented so they always come up with inventions that have practical values, which can increase productivity and improve life, in such areas as cosmetics and medicines.
On the contrary, although private companies are given the right to do scientific research, they must be strictly monitored by the governments. It is undeniable that these institutions are profit-driven, they spend their money wisely to ensure maximum benefits and every resource is used effectively to avoid waste. However, some of them might be doing illegal researches. For example, some companies focused on developing biochemical weapons, some carried out inadequate trials which resulted in the birth of the cloning, hence threatening the world’s peace. Therefore, the government should use its power to prevent these kinds of researches and protect the public’s security.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that governments and private companies should be actively involved in scientific researches, with sufficient and proper monitoring from the former.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'monitored'.
Suggestion: sometimes monitored
...oss the world are being carried out and monitored sometimes by governments, sometimes by private en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63278688525 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10725585815 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9962291215 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.153846154 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271196156993 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983876330101 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530838675256 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17366781129 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183292691368 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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