The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. the second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The given first pie chart illustrates an average Australian families energy consumption in six different purpose while the second pie chart provides the information about emission of greenhouse gas for the reason of household energy use.
Overall, the citizen of Australia use large amount of energy for the purpose of heating and water heating and the principal reason of greenhouse gas emission s water heating.
According to the charts, 72 percent of energy is used for water heating and heating work. On the other hand, a tiny amount of energy is used for cooling and energy consumption in lighting is low by 2. Australian families used 7 percent and 15 percent energy respectively for refrigeration and other appliances.
It is clear from second charts, the key source of greenhouse gas is water heating. It releases 32 percent of greenhouse gas and the other cause of greenhouse gas emission is other appliances. For the low use of energy in cooling purpose emission of greenhouse gas is as well as low. From refrigeration and heating release almost same amount of greenhouse gas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...chart illustrates an average Australian families energy consumption in six different pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, while, as for, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08888888889 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8303033908 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438888888889 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6747445581 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376355914384 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174370837881 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090753049176 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253081593496 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986668865355 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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