It is common nowadays for each member of family to have their own peace of modern technology. Some people think that this will lead to a break down in the family relationships and communication to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Today’s time there is a great development in the technological world, Due to this, each family member uses a different kind of technology devices. Some people believe that this new trend would cut the love and conversation between the person in a family. This essay will show how modern technology will impact family relationships is improved if it is used under the limit.
To begin with, Many people of the new technology in the family to enjoy their spare time. It is seen that many youngsters have different mindset so that, they are not spending more time with family and choose to play computer games. For example, recently there is an article published in times India that more than 50% of students utilize their free time on the Internet or online games. And therefore, It will create a problem in a relationship, If the youth use modern technology more and not provide enough time for family. Hence, computer gaming is going to detrimental in a family in that case that young people use more.
The new invention makes human life much easier in the time of communication with family members or friends. This technology provides the long-distance talk at a low price, while in the past required more money for the same conversation. In other words, nowadays different kind of social applications are available on the Internet with these software people can easily touch with the family member in the abroad. For this reason, relationships and communication become stronger because of modern technology.
In conclusion, Currently, people surrounded by technology and this thing have a positive effect on the family relationship and communication. In my opinion, the use of modern devices is very helpful, if it is used in a limited way
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 5, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...case that young people use more. The new invention makes human life much easier in the tim...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a limited way" with adverb for "limited"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... devices is very helpful, if it is used in a limited way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05154639175 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89624064435 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8797265435 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281070143632 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109715974495 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549897722383 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180377188767 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339936111862 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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