The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do
you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give
the solution?
In recent times, there has much been a colossal upsurge in the trend to see prodigies discussing the problems living beings facing including deforestation caused by the government and various organizations. In my opinion, excessive construction of buildings by cutting down trees causes disturbance to all living beings. This essay will discuss this problem and suggest a solution.
Firstly, there are myriad of reasons why deforestation is the main problem which needs to be focussed on priority. The most conspicuous one is that earth is exposed to heat by three-times when compared to the last two decades. If this problem is not stressed to resolve, then most of the species which are already under threat due to lack of food and place to live may die soon. For example, the sparrow count reduced to four percent due to deforestation. Apparently, humans who are as a part of the ecosystem will be affected.
However, there are measures that can be implemented to mitigate the horrifying impacts of deforestation. By growing plants, not only inhabitants can stay happy by having sufficient food and water but also protect the life cycle of the environment. For instance, last summer, India was saved from a hot climate by planting more trees. Hence it is evident why this solution needs to be implemented to avoid deforestation.
In view of the arguments above, one can conclude that the benefits of growing trees to avoid the most significant problem which is deforestation are indeed too great to ignore.
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- Some people point that experiential learning (i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education. However, others think a traditional form of teaching is the best. Do you think experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges? 77
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- Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the work place, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against ol 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.076 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94265458387 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5571183173 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137627823953 0.242375264174 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041747158554 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307610987572 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781273755934 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212660596151 0.0609392437508 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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