The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
In this day and age of industrialization, modernization and ever-growing technology, environment has been under threat due to several reasons which leads to a moot question who is responsible for solving it? The sword of mother nature hanging above the earth has induced serious warnings to the mankind. While some agrees to favour that responsibility lies on the shoulders of government and associated organizations, others have a contrary view pointing fingers towards each individual. this article shall discuss both sides of the critique before arriving at a plausible conclusion.
In the realm of modern world and flourishing population, it is none other than the government bodies who should be held accountable for the deterioration of the environment. An unhedged risk against nature taken by legislature seems to be the possible reason for destruction of nature. For instance, earth could have been conserved to some point if local bodies had taken stringent action against accumulation of sewage and threatening usage of plastic. government and legislature could reduce the degree of environment damage.
However, the role of each individual in the destruction of environment could not be over ruled. In this elevated time of the destruction of natural habitat, even the action of a single person counts. Man is the crown of creation. Henceforth each person has the social commitment to protect environment.
After diligently analyzing the above points, one can indubitably conclude that both government and people should be held answerable to even minute altercations in environment. individual, family, society and finally government together can make mammoth changes to protect and conserve mother nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, however, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 5.75862068966 399% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61596958175 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17523051085 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608365019011 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7516792866 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174112782263 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528167176073 0.0925447433944 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568000925594 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951019818802 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338154719668 0.0609392437508 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.